You're hiring for a cold email copywriter and you have no idea what to actually ask them to do, what they should produce, or how to know if they're good at it.
Most job descriptions floating around are useless - they say things like "write compelling subject lines" and "create engaging email sequences" without any specifics about what that actually means or how you measure it.
Here's what a cold email copywriter actually does, what they need to know, and how to evaluate whether they can actually write cold email that converts.
What a Cold Email Copywriter Actually Owns
A cold email copywriter has one job: write emails that make people reply who wouldn't have otherwise.
That's it. Not emails that are clever, or funny, or well-written in a literary sense. Emails that work.
Specifically, a cold email copywriter should own:
- Subject lines - The line that gets the email opened. Usually 4-8 words. Tests at 25-35% open rates.
- Email body copy - Usually 50-150 words. Gets the person to reply or click.
- Call-to-action - The specific action you want them to take. Not "let's chat" but "can I send you 3 examples of how this worked for companies like yours?"
- Sequence structure - How many emails, what spacing, what each email does. Usually 3-5 emails over 2-3 weeks.
- Angle discovery - Figuring out what actually makes your prospect care. Not features. Outcomes.
A cold email copywriter does NOT own lead list quality, infrastructure setup, or email sending. Those are separate roles. If your copywriter is dealing with bounces or spam folders, you've got an infrastructure problem, not a copy problem.
The Skills You're Actually Hiring For
When you're evaluating a cold email copywriter, look for these specific capabilities:
1. They can identify the actual problem you solve
Not your product. The problem. There's a difference.
If you sell CRM software, the product is CRM software. The problem is that sales teams are losing deals because they don't follow up consistently. A good copywriter starts there, not with features.
Ask them: "What's the one problem we solve that matters most to our buyer?" If they give you a feature list, they're not ready.
2. They understand your ideal customer profile deeply
A good copywriter will ask you detailed questions about your buyer before writing anything. Not generic questions. Specific ones:
- What's their typical day look like?
- What metric are they measured on?
- What's currently broken in their world?
- What would success look like for them?
They're not asking to be nice. They're asking because cold email only works when it's specific to who's reading it.
3. They write short, direct copy that gets to the point
A cold email should be readable on a phone in 10 seconds. Most copywriters have no idea how to do this because they're trained to be eloquent. Cold email copywriters are trained to be brief.
Here's what this actually looks like:
Hey [first name], We work with [type of company] to increase [specific outcome] by [realistic number]. Quick question - is that something you'd want to explore? [Your name]
That's 24 words. No fluff. No setup. No story. Just signal that you understand their world and you have something relevant.
4. They test and iterate based on real data
A copywriter who says "this is the best version" without testing is guessing. A good one will tell you:
- "We tested 3 different subject lines. This one got 34% open rate vs. 22% and 19%."
- "We changed the CTA from 'let's chat' to 'can I show you how we did this for [company]?' and reply rate went from 8% to 14%."
- "After 50 replies, this angle resonated strongest with technical buyers."
If they can't show you data, they don't actually know what works.
What to Actually Ask Them to Produce
When you hire someone, don't say "write some cold email copy." Be specific about what you need:
A complete email sequence (not individual emails)
A sequence is usually 3-5 emails over 10-15 days. Each email has a different job:
- Email 1: Get them to read it. Mention something specific about their company or situation. Ask a small question.
- Email 2: (3-4 days later) Assume they didn't reply because they're busy, not because they hate you. Give them a new angle. New reason to care.
- Email 3: (3-4 days later) Social proof or specific example. "We did this for [similar company], here's what happened."
- Email 4 (optional): Last attempt. Ask for a small step. "Just 15 min call to see if it makes sense?"
A copywriter should produce the full sequence with clear reasoning for each email's angle.
5-10 subject line variations with open rate benchmarks
Not just the subject lines. The benchmarks. Here's what a real submission should look like:
Subject Line Option 1: "quick question re: [company]" Expected open rate: 28-32% (short, curiosity, company specific) Subject Line Option 2: "your [title] mentioned [pain point] last week" Expected open rate: 32-36% (personalized, timely reference) Subject Line Option 3: "[company] + [company] (new partnership?)" Expected open rate: 24-28% (curiosity gap, pattern interrupt)
They should explain their reasoning, not just guess.
Red Flags When Hiring
Watch out for:
- They want to "personalize" every email with first names and company names only. Personalization is good. But if that's the depth of their strategy, they don't understand cold email. Real personalization is about angles and outcomes, not just inserting variables.
- They talk about "tone" and "voice" more than results. Cold email is not creative writing. It's direct marketing. Care about conversions, not clever.
- They can't explain why each email in the sequence exists. If they say "just testing different approaches," that's not a strategy. That's throwing darts.
- They haven't sent cold email themselves. Ask them directly: "What's the last cold email sequence you personally sent?" If they haven't done it, they don't know what works.
How Good Ones Differ From Average Ones
A good cold email copywriter doesn't just write. They diagnose.
Before writing anything, they ask questions until they understand:
- Exactly who we're reaching (title, company size, industry, specific pain)
- What we do differently than competitors
- What outcome matters most to this buyer
- What's the barrier to them replying (skepticism, urgency, not understanding value?)
Then they write to overcome that specific barrier. Not generic cold email. Targeted cold email.
This is why you can have the same copywriter write for two different companies and both convert well - they're not following a template. They're solving for what actually matters to that specific buyer.
What You Actually Need From Them
Your cold email copywriter should deliver:
- A complete sequence (3-5 emails) ready to launch
- 5-10 tested subject line options with reasoning
- Clear explanation of the angle and why it works for your buyer
- Notes on what to test next based on replies
- Willingness to revise based on real reply data
Not just words. A system. Something you can actually use and improve over time.
When You Should Consider Outsourcing This Role
You can hire a good copywriter and run this in-house. But there's a gap between knowing what good cold email looks like and actually managing it at scale.
A copywriter handles the writing. But running cold email at scale means managing lead lists, handling replies, iterating based on data, managing multiple sequences, and adjusting based on what's actually working. That's a full operation, not a single role.
If you want the copywriting part only, hire a contractor. If you want the whole thing running smoothly - copy, infrastructure, reply management, optimization - that's a different conversation.
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